She draws sweetness out of life,
Regard from those deemed without it
She draws on paper at the beach,
And Wisdom from her journey
She draws health from her fare
And affection from the timid
She draws resources to her needs
And calm for discordant hearts
She is an artist at life
Skilled and practicing her craft
With dedication and happiness
And I accompany her in the journey
Sipping from the abundant nectar
Of her plentiful ripe fruits
And I am utterly satisfied
A contest entry
- PICTURE POSTED - 10 POETS by Think2wice.
450 points, ended November 8, 2007, 6 entries
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380 points, ended November 27, 2007, 20 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This is a chantlike portrait of words...
breathing life into a soul of harmony.
Depicting how such a spirit can fulfill others
by just being. I very much enjoy thoughts that
show a positive take on life and this is absolutely
a pleasure! Blue
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I really liked this one..... interesting take on life. Good job- thanks for entering it in the contest!
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Check My rules,,,,,,Please in which option have you entered? But I love your piece. specially the last few lines..
She is an artist at life
Skilled and practicing her craft
With dedication and happiness
And I accompany her in the journey
Sipping from the abundant nectar
Of her plentiful ripe fruits
And I am utterly satisfied -
Great Stuff ,love it
heart felt and sincere...I like your insight, very enjoyable to read well done. a pleasure to read Nothing to change. I look forward to your next write. > Love these lines>>>
She draws on paper at the beach,
And Wisdom from her journey
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I agree that it was strange this poem was up far before the picture, but I also find it to be wonderful. Please do not remove it from the contest!
Good luck to you!
Sabrina
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ummm...nice but she hasn't put the picture up yet
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