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Mask you Wear

A mass of skin,

is entwined

within societies

tattoo cloned way.

 

 

Its rich soul,

buried

beneath a mask

of mute costume attire.

 

 

~Life's faceless performer...

Author notes

Prompt is: "Everything Your Looking For Lies Behind The Mask You Wear". by Stephen Paul

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  • Kari gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    omg this is totally wonderful! This is another poem that a lot of ppl can relate to. Awesome job on the gold here !


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    Wonderful! Great metaphor and so true. The mask we wear leaves us lifeless...often do to the fitting into society, we try to be who we are not.
    Love the end line, very strong and well done.

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