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Loving You

Loving You…..an Acrostic of Love

Laughter, friendship, love…  the order of the day
Only you can fill my heart with all these things
Vested feelings, hopes and dreams all come our way
Instilling  happiness with each touch, each word spoken

Never ending love, growing closer with each day
Giving , receiving, showing each other how much we care

Yesterday was sad and lonely, today bright and clear
Our lives together are a blessing
Using what God has given us to endear

Dee Garner
© November 8, 2007

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  • leo2
    November 13, 2007

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    What a beautiful tribute to lasting true love you have written here. I've found that acrostics are usually forced into shape but this one is an exception. Excellent work my friend. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. I've been missing your lovely smile.


  • Vernal Bloom
    November 11, 2007

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    Ah this is such a breath-taking poem, auntie. I love sweet acrostics like this and you are so professional in them. Just loved what you have shared. Thank you and good luck in the contest

    ~Massy~


  • Kari gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Hey I picked this choice as well! You did wonderful and it's so very sweet Well done Granna and good luck in the contest


  • Stardust100
    November 9, 2007
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    forgot these


  • Stardust100
    November 9, 2007
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    This was so lovely and sweet I really like this

  • pozo
    November 9, 2007

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    Lovely poem. This was a great acrostic mom It was very romantic.
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Partners In Crime
    November 9, 2007

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    This is a beautiful acrostic, gave me a real sense of happiness and hope for love. Thankyou for entering and glad to see you back Dee.
    Souldancer7


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    This is just lovely Dee, and it's soooooooooo good to see you back

    Just as your line said: yesterday was sad and lonely, today is bright and clear...because You are back with us

    XXJeannette

  • Ir.muse
    November 8, 2007

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    hello my lovely mama

    Great to have you back here.
    Lots of love and wish you always the best.

    Shahrzad

  • Just4u
    November 8, 2007

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    We either grow together or we grow apart. It sounds like you have the right formula here...

    Hugs...Eddy

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