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True Love

She didnt belive them
They said true love was real

She never knew it until now
until he came along

She never knew how it would feel
She thought it would be magic

She thought he loved her
She thought he was true

She never thought it would happen to her
Until it did

She didnt belive it
They told her it was true

She confronted him
He denys it

She thinks this cant be happening
But it is

She want to belive him
But she knows she cant

So she leaves him
Before he can hurt her any more

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  • hypnorocker
    March 22, 2008
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    interesting how everyone thinks "true love" is something static... when it's different for everyone and no one really has the same idea of it why use those words... Sorry, I'm rambling... It's a nice poem, glad you knew when to leave a negative relationship, hope your healing is easy for you...
    peace,
    hypnorocker

  • Momma To Be
    November 8, 2007

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    I like it. All love ends in agony even if it is because of death. but no matter how much we try we will never beable to brase ourselves for it but there is one thing you will have forever thats me you pinky swore.