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Sign of the Times


Cursed red light!
There he is again.
Taunting me, staring.
Help me I am homeless.
Why am I not caring?
Could this light be any longer?
That’s it…eyes dead ahead.
Cursed peripheral vision!
I long for the tunnel.
Focus on my own despair.
Will work for food.
Yeah, partner!
Work for food.
Exactly what I am trying to do
If only this light would…
Spare change?
Can I spare change?
Ah, finally!
Green light.

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  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    Thanks for entering

    I read this as a muddle of thoughts and choices, possibly by a homeless person. A little confusing but also interesting at the same time.

    Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 14, 2007
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    Welcome to All Poetry

    A very interesting take on the prompt. Thanks so much for entering our contest
    Gaylene


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 11, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'Day bhoward664

    This is an interesting write I must say.

    I like the flow
    Thank you for your entry
    best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda