for me red is embarresment
I can feel my blush climbing up on my face
even when I am freezing
I blush like a fool
thus I hate red
A contest entry
- moves like red by Cat.
650 points, ended November 11, 2007, 19 entries
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thanks for entering the contest, good to see you here...
al -
this is so real- i love that you used your voice to tell this story of red movement- i think you may want to run this through spellcheck
thanks so much for entering
m -
red is aggression actually,,if you hate red you are not aggressive..its true..good luck xx
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red faced...
Funny I didn't pick you for the blushing type! I think a blush can be cute myself! Well written my friend!
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I blushed once upon a time
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I like this simply because I hate the feeling of blush flooding my face and I relate very well to this.
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