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The Thoughts of Today

Wishing you were here with me,
hopeing it would set me free.
Just to hear your softest voice,
could only be my final choice.
The love I have will follow through,
wishing you to love me too.
Through my thoughts your footsteps roam,
looking for their only home.
You think of me as just a friend,
and never see the things I send.
And falling through my darkened thought,
a glympse of you is what i caught.
Your on my mind in every way,
and in my heart through everyday.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    a glympse of you is what i caught.
    Your on my mind in every way,
    and in my heart through everyday.

    Oh..you took me there in the beauty of your vision of love..such a hopefulness and such a impact you brought to me..I can't express the joy of it...Indeed you made me to think through your thought provoking
    verse here....that what a truthful flow and the touch of the openness is seen in your wonderful words .. Thanks for entring in my contest..