I hate being on my own,
Everyone can see that,
By the smile I force,
Hoping they don't see,
What's really bothering me.
Do you spend your life, going back in your mind to that time?,
The time of our fist conversation,
Over the phone,
Talking of what would be,
If I was there,
God it kills me,
Wanting to hold you in my arms.
Somebody wants you,
Somebody needs you,
Somebody cant breathe, without you it's lonely,
Somebody dreams about you each night,
I am going through hell,
Not being able to see you.
When will we talk again?
I know it is hard to find the time,
I would just love to hear your voice for a little while,
Just so you know you have been on my mind.
Somebody wants you,
Somebody needs you,
Somebody cant breathe, without you it's lonely,
Somebody dreams about you each night,
I am going through hell,
Not being able to see you.
Baby it's ok I am not mad,
I love you dearly,
But it just kills walking down the street alone,
Ignoring everyone as you stay in my head,
I wonder just when, when, when,
Will I be right there with you?
Can't you see,
This is killing me.
Somebody wants you,
Somebody needs you,
Somebody cant breathe, without you it's lonely,
Somebody dreams about you each night,
I am going through hell,
Not being able to see you.
I hate being on my own,
Without you here with me,
Somebody wants you,
Somebody needs you,
Somebody cant breathe, without you it's lonely,
Somebody dreams about you each night,
I am going through hell,
Not being able to see you.
Baby that somebody is me,
I want you,
I need you,
I can't breathe, without you it's lonely,
I love you baby,
Come to me!!
Author notes
I was inspired by the Enrique Iglesias song Somebody's Me. I just love that song. The parts:
Somebody wants you,
Somebody needs you,
Somebody cant breathe, without you it's lonely,
Somebody dreams about you each night,
Those parts and these two lines come from his song:
I hate being on my own,
Do you spend your life, going back in your mind to that time?,
The poem may not be as good as the song but I hope you enjoy it anyways.
A contest entry
- Serenade by second-born.
600 points, ended November 23, 2007, 18 entries
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awww very swwwweeeetttt and sad very emotional I LOVEU
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I love that song of Enrique Iglesias and I know why you were inspired to write a song based on it…your adaptation is nice…thank you for sharing this piece!
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DAMN HUNNY I can't take it either i need you to i love you more than anything and i wish i could be there to hold you but i need you to let me know if this hell is to much for you if it is just let me know i will be heart broken but i don't want to hurt you i love you more than anything and i know this distance that divids us is killing you just let me know what you want to do what you need to do and no matter what the answer is i am okay w/ it okay don't for get i love u baby i just hate what this is doing to you to me
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Baby I am not going to go anywhere unless it's straight into your arms. I love you baby and that's what keeps me going. I don't want to lose you or anything like that. My heart is yours. I love you. The distance is not going to change that. When I am finally in your arms I dont think I would want to love. Baby you are my breath without you well I don't know where I would be. I love you. I hate the distance so damn much but I love you a whole hell of a lot more. I know eventually that I will be in your arms and be able to taste your kiss. I love you so much.
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I really liked this poem
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LOVE IT
I love this peom very much. you did a great job on this write. I know the song that you speak of, its one of my favorites. The emotion can be felt all through this poem. I can relate to that lonely feeling.
Kat
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