[Verse one]
They say all of these things
That hurt me
And i have no guardian
To mend my scar
And if there is one away afar
Where is he?
Where is my guardian?
[Verse 2]
The sun is out, weathers warm
Yet i still shiver
And i have no guardian
To keep away the cold
Stay with me so i don't feel alone
Where is he?
Where is my guardian?
{Chorus}
And its only my life
that bothers me
It's just darkness, where i can't see
But all i'm saying is one thing
Where is my guardian?(2x)
[Verse three]
I'm tripping and then i fall
Now i bleed
And i have no guardian
and no band-aids
Searching in the light that fades
Where is he?
Where is my guardian?
[Last verse]
But i have only one question
It's only one
And i have no guardian
To answer mine
Still i'm looking for one to find
Where is he?
Where is my guardian?
{Chorus}
And its only my life
that bothers me
It's just darkness, where i can't see
But all i'm saying is one thing
Where is my guardian?(3x)
Where is he?
Where is my guardian?
Why is he.......not here.....with me....
Author notes
i wrote from the inspiration of the word Guardian
A contest entry
- OPEN FOR ALL- Give me your best by Razor-Blade Romance.
440 points, ended November 22, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow this is wonderfully written and right to the point. Congratulations. Wonderful flow and detail work.
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AMAZING.!!
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Wonderfull
Wow,I love this song,it dark but beautifull at the same time,you're really good!!!
Sweet_CHANTING
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rocks
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This is really amazing. I love it.
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this is good
i like it alot
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Yes we all hate those broken promises and lies. this is depressing to me and i don't really like depressing. But don't get me wrong this is still good. But i still like that one better
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this is damn good
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thy words touch and cut through my heart as one left wodering where someone that cares simply is?
yes you touched me with this song!
I almost hear it within my mind!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Silk!! I want this song!! I could practically hear the music!! I love it!!!
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Splendid/Rocking song
Wow ..i keep saying wow lol..anyway..this song..do you have a tune for it? If so, I'd like to hear it..I can sometimes relate to this..wow and you're joining that contest that i am joining..you make it hard to compete because this song is REALLY SUPER!
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wow!
I like this very much! It is inspiring. Did you ever find your guardian?
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What a beautiful write !
Your words flowed through me like a rapid.
I enjoyed your lyrics a lot. (I am in a band and a song writer myself)
This is awesome !
Well Done -
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♥Thanks♥
Thanks Alex
If you want, though personally i don't think they are good enough, make it a real song or something use it for your band if you want it would be tottally cool i would ve to hear it. But thats if you want though i don't they are songworthy or band song worthy
But anyways the comment is much appreciated
Silky
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wow that was amazing..... i especially liked the unique rhyming pattern and the repitition of 'where is he, where is my guardian'and the chorus wouild have to be my favorite. Awesome job, you wrote one incredible poem.
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beautiful
wow yes would be an honour to put lyrics to this
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that is lovely
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Hey good here. Hope somebody finds your words for a good song. Would love to hear it when it comes out. Love the words.
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Thank You I hope so too!
Silky
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You may have a hit. I hope you forward it to a person who writes music for lyrics.
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Thanks Your Comment is Much appreciated!
Silky
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the form of this works for me, I like the rhyming schemes, and the simple language that describes the familiar quest, or search, that takes a lifetime to discover. A nice write.
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If organized religion is the opium of the masses, then disorganized religion is the marijuana of the lunatic fringe.
Makes me a stoner, hypothetically.
:3
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