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Travel With Your Beauty

A silky moon disappears
on your delicious body
filling my curving reflection
with lurid desire
for you

But it wasn't my flesh you were after
though that was still sufficiently pleasing
to the eye

Why do you love me, said I

Because of your soul, said you

I was tarnished and blurred
but you dug in deep
found the gold
you found what I could not see
dusted me off and wiped me down

How did you get past
my usual sabatoge
The block I went around was long
My mind
a neighborhood that shouldn't be traveled
alone

 

It is you who is the beautiful one, I say

And now we watch the Northern Lights chortle
as our desire patiently crashes
into insane hopes
of peace and love

We can tavel to yesterday
where we laughed and cried
We'll watch the dew
disolve into the morning light

We can travel to today
and contemplate the meaning
of life, share ice cream
and a full moon

We can travel to tomorrow
hold hands and dream







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This is for my Hunny Bunny who remains my 'candle in the darkness'....

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  • Sean Logue
    November 10, 2007
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    Like it.

    Wonderful.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 9, 2007

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    Sooo nice and passionate poem for your loved one, dreams are treasures of the future, thank you for the entry, good luck...MM


  • tanzanite
    November 8, 2007

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    This is spectacular stuff. I loved it on all levels. It is sensual romance and it breathes life affirming acceptance. I loved the reference to the neighbourhood of your mind - that was my favorite metaphor. I love the linking of past, present and future. You did an awesome job on this one and I know that you will do well in this contest.

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