The light never dawns within my soul
that your face doesn't shine like the sun,
my heart is etched with every precious line
your image has carved with love.
Every morn I feel the song float through my mind
of how you bless my life with your presence
so that every thought rising inside
floats upon passion's sky
being a cloud of bliss
raining joys droplets
over my landscape
so barren without you to give it life.
I will kiss each sunrise with praise
because you are God's creation
caressing my essence
in the most cherish joys.
A garden grows from my memories
flowers of affection blooming radiantly
their scent filling me constantly
waiting for the hours when I can hold your petals.
Author notes
Prompt - thinking of you
A contest entry
- you are in my thoughts today... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended November 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A garden grows from my memories
flowers of affection blooming radiantly
their scent filling me constantly
waiting for the hours when I can hold your petals.
I love the immagery and its indirect approach to the prompt..Indeed you took me there in the beauty of your vision..such a beauty of love and such a impact you brought to me..I can't express the joy of it... you made me to think through your heart warming verse here....that what a truthful flow and the touch of the depth is seen in your wonderful words ..
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