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Conquered Thoughts

You are always on my mind,
My first thought whenever I wake up,
And the last thing on my thoughts before I go to bed,
The necessity I have and you forever lingering image.

 

Your smoldering eyes that have burnt my soul,

Those eyes which I cannot ever forget,

You're in my short-term and long-term memory,

You're something my senses can always detect.

 

Just your breath on my neck or your own personal odour,

I know it's you before my eyes have caught you in their sights,

The sound of your walk or the chill in your air,

That's just so unique and so easy to know who you are.

 

How do you keep such a hold on me?

A power...A passion...A pursuit...

You're always there and I don't know what I'd do without you,

You're my memory...my memento...my mind...

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    How do you keep such a hold on me?

    A power...A passion...A pursuit...

    You're always there and I don't know what I'd do without you,

    You're my memory...my memento...my mind...



    Indeed you are a soul of the poet which gathers the beauty of love with in himself..and this can be felt here in the words..you are very passionate about the path of love through the means of this blessing of love and through the means of poetic immagery here..I love the essence of this great poem..this is indeed a poem to make ponder my friend..thanks for entering in my contest.. well done..


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    didn't know...

    ...I HAD THAT POWER! L.O.L.! No 4-real this is a good
    piece though you may want hold back a little; guys like a challenge you know! l.o.l.


    • Passionate Phoenix
      November 8, 2007
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      u cheeky bugger! lol glad u like this one, although It's all very well you saying about a guy liking a challenge...my fireman wasn't a challenge!! xx