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Devil as a Female

I will twist my fingers
tightly around your throat.
I will grin and laugh
as blood trickles down my fingers.
You will have a blood bath.

One time, two times, three times, four?
How many times did you call me what?
You called me all of these things,
these things that I’m not.
Why did you do that?
I thought we had it all,
but now, I will just watch, gleefully,
as your head falls off.

I don’t drink blood.
I won’t chew your meat,
but I will find mud
and throw your head in there.
Ain’t that neat?

As your head sinks and burns,
God will give me a proud shout,
for I have beaten the Devil,
disguised as an evil girl.
That’s all true, for me and you.

Author notes

I was going to enter this in Cerebral Assassin's Contest Sick and Twisted 9, but that contest closed two days ago from now. But I'm still posting it on the site, though. I hope that you enjoy it, too.

As you can tell, it's about the Devil being a female...and it not being revealed until later on in the relationship, which was why the lead male had to kill her, because she was the Devil.

I hope you just tell me what you think...okay?

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  • Raydog
    April 9, 2009
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    Wow, don't we all know a woman like that? When I wrote I'll Wait Just A Little While Longer, I hadn't yet realized that she was literally the Devil in disguise...But I sure as Hell know it now! Maybe I'll cut her head off too....ooops, I didn't just say that did I?


  • Symphonie
    November 9, 2007

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    Oh. My. God. This was like...violent and stuff. Wow. The blood and gore was like...wow...and I was like...wow when I read it. I mean, I'm speechless. I'm sure that this would have won or something.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 8, 2007
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    ok brother ummm
    i love you lol