Space exists
petals not gathered,
blue of lost drops,
Time to dream,
Time to leave.
In devoid..
not followed ways,
sadness of undone foams
not more to bubble.
Longing
pieces from broken glasses,
faded colors
of flowers could not grow.
Sound of piano
never touched
because not learnt lesson.
Sigh of leaves
in autumn gilt
in hour of sunset.
Lost hopes,
got a beating..nights of longings,
only memories,
open windows
glances of promise
eyes of illusion.
But..
Forever you would stay
in immense empty space
between heart.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture #3 --"Promise Unkept"
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest -- Number 3 by Ethereal One.
1200 points, ended November 22, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I really like the rhythm of this write. It compliments it's meaning. Deliberately and slowly unwinding. Peaceful.
Best of luck in the contest.
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