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~ Fragile Rope


Fearless wind of an enchanting night
Bed of thorns unfold on my sight
Blinding maze of unknown destiny
Endless nightmare upon my reverie..

Challenging tides of a blood red sea
Revengful phantoms of my integrity
Follow this night, there might be an end
For now in this darkness we shall descend..

Sorrow might lead you to a new road
Struggles may ease your unnatural load
You hold on to the lifes fragile rope
Betrayed at the end by your very own hope..

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  • chilali
    November 30, 2008

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    Again, another rhyme!! Amazing. I love the ending stanza, especially the last two lines. Life's fragile rope! Bravo Lonely, Bravo!


  • Decorus Somnium
    February 12, 2008

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    God...I love your work. You fascinate me more and more with every next work I read by you! I love love love this poem. So life like and so deep. Great job.
    Keep writing


    • Lonely
      February 13, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking out time and reading my work and leaving such lovely comments I'm glad you like my stuff!

      ~ Love, Lonely

  • mina nagi
    November 12, 2007

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    Sigh.... this was very much heartfelt... though sad but beautifully penned... it must be very aweful when the hope drowns in its own tides and there's no sign of light in the dark tunnel... I know the feeling, I can relate to this bridge over the trouble waters...
    nicely worded ... Dolly this is one of your bestest I've read after a long time...
    keep it up...

    mina



  • Beauty Sleeps
    November 9, 2007

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    Wow... this is so sad, why dear friend?

    But the words are so beautiful... it's like seeing a rose bud at night, when it's dying and losing its petals... even in death, there's something so appealing about it. That is what your words here are like.

    Kate


  • LadyUnique silver member
    November 8, 2007

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    ditto what poetic weaver said was it just yesterday you mentioned having writers block?? this must of come out right after you said that
    love the rhyme. it's bumpless... and the subject is one i know well. the last line is so sad but fitting. i've been there, am there and it does seem that we are sometimes hung by our own expectations...
    life is just crap sometimes...


    • Lonely
      November 9, 2007
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      Yes I wrote it right after sending you that message.. I guess you goodluck and wishes helped me Thank you for the comment and your good wishes!

      ~ Lonely


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    Wow,

    This about sums the way I feel so many days.. So many thought you jot here I can truly relate to. Thanks for sharing, and how powerfully expressed you have penned this one my friend.

    Peace, Timothy

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