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The blade

I love the feel of a cold blade,
The way it pierces the skin,
To let all the sin flow,
Watching the red river go!
Such a beautiful sight,
a pure delight.
Every drop is cherished and lovingly shed.

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  • XxrockxXxgirlxX
    April 7, 2008
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    I used to self harm. This poem captures those ideas and thoughts perfectly. Stay safe.


  • sensitive as a burn
    March 11, 2008
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    Intense

    Your imagery here was very simple but vivid at the same time..