Hauntings from others
The words they had said
Echoes of truth
Now as such in my head
Has authored the pain
Leaving stains unremoved
Robbed by my youth
Of good choices to choose
A contest entry
- November New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering
This strikes me as sad. As though choices you made meant that you had to grow up too soon. Nothing that anybody deserves.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Faerie
Site Greeter -
Thanks for entering and welcome to allpoetry
This sounds as if some kind of medical problem has disrupted the ability to make choices. Nice flow and structure.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
Site Greeter
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Thanks for entering
A strong piece. One thing I learnt a long time ago is that in life there will be no less than three solutions to a problem, whether we like them is another matter.
Great write.
Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance
Rosemary -
Welcome to AllPoetry
G'Day Memphis rae
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Very deep write. Thought-provoking, made me sad
Beautifully penned
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Welcome to All Poetry
This sounds quite sad but very intense.Sometimes the choices made by others for us affect the choices we are able or not able to make in the future.
A very thought provoking write.Thanks so much for entering our contest.
Gaylene
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