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Darkness [of my past]

I'm living in the darkness, of the sins of my past
I endure presant, but the shadows won't pass
They linger in the air
I see them everywhere
I can't escape them
They are everywhere

Just let me know if you understand what I'm going through

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  • Stacy Kay
    February 5, 2008
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    i understand

    i know how this feels now more than i ever did before... but this really does put some things into perspective... and it really does make an impression... thank you for sharing your talent... you are the type of poet that inspires me to write.

    ~Stacy~


  • teardrop gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    I Understand

    John,
    I understand fully. I also know you are one hell of a writer. I started writing when I was your age. (I am an old fart now) LOL.

    TD


  • love my jose luis
    November 11, 2007

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    I felt this poem really deep in me somewhere it struck a nerve im not sure if its good or bad yet, it just really got to me in a way. It kinda made my stomach turn over, I guess that means its a good poem though because it provokes feelings.
    -Alix