Since the day we met its been a dream come true,
thinking about our future me and you.
There is nothing I wouldnt give,
Just to spend the rest of my life with you
I feel like I can carry the weight
of the world on my shoulders.
Till death due us part
We shall be together.
Your the one I've waited for
now and forever.
Nothing will come between us
And ruin our love.
It is true and pure and will always remain.
I love you always and forever this will always be true.
Amanda Sue I really do love you.
Author notes
This is for the love of my life my Shade
A contest entry
- Almost Anything Goes by bloodletter68.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
EEEEW! Daddy's being all mushy! How disgustering! *runs to go find uncle dwagon and tell him her daddy's distgustering*
-
How sweet, Justin. Ever sentimental...what a softy. JK! I'm happy to know you DO have a soul and love has touched your dark heart. Yet, I still wonder...you have all this emotion and yet the only thing you call me is a dirty hoe!
-
It's beautiful, my love. I'm honored that you wrote this for me, even if you did use my middle name lol, I love it and I kinda teared up a little bit.
I love you till death takes me
Shade
-
well this is a good write shows your true love and feelings in it. you could (at least i believe you could) get a little bit more detail. you have the right idea just expand on it. But what you have right here is great. it makes the whole poem worth reading completely
Adding your comment:
