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Just Right

Trust me, I know this,
You'll notice
No commotions
And no bullshit
To distract your notions-
I emerge
With words
Undisturbed
By the world.
Inside or outside,
It feels just right,
This is why
I like
To write
At midnight.

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Just want to say something about the calm of night.

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  • StarvingAuthor
    November 8, 2007

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    well done.
    mine is 3am.
    there's something to be said about the night...brings about some fantastic writes.
  • HaleyMary
    November 8, 2007

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    This is beautiful. Good flow. Sometimes I find that some of my inspiration comes to my mostly at the late hours of the night or early in the morning, too. This poem had a peaceful feeling to it. Keep up the good work.