Compare me to her
i don't think so
There is none like me
I catered to you
took care of my man
I did all the things that your
new woman can't.
So don't think that you got something better,
I'm not to be duplicated by some
cheatin' ass brotha.
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tell it sista...tell it...
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You go girl! I adore the spirit of this one, self confident, sexy and oh! so damn independent. A woman who won't settle for less than will get what she wants! Strong and intense!
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Oh I love this one!
I have no idea how I missed this one, sis
LOVED IT
Keep em comin!
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DAYUM!! say that shit. they just don't know until its gone. theeeeeeeeeeen they try 2 compare. to late. He lost a good one
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Amen
This is telling it like it is, and not like it use to be.....Loved it....
novy
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I sure like this little rant. The ending is the clincher. Double timing hood. straight and clever.
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Tell It Like It Is
This is another poem that shows off your poetic capabilities. This is what poetry is about. I like how you take the anger and put it into words to paint a picture and show your true feelings. This is why I read poetry and it is poetry like this that inspires me to write and get better so I can match and compare with your talent. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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