It's night, total darkness, that's when I call upon you to join me. Another rendevous. In your sick and twisted delight, you come to me, wanting me to dominate you. You like my dark side: the leather, the whips, the stiletto heels. You even like being gagged. What I say goes! The leather blindfold we always use... not this time! This time, I want you to see your torture. I want you to see when it's coming... to see you flinch. The sound of leather on leather as I straddle you. You try to kiss me, to suck my perky breasts, I slap you. How dare you try to take control! This is my game! I stand on the bed, looking down on your pitiful, defenseless body, one stiletto heel trailing from your neck to your testicles. You wince out in pain, eyes squeezed shut, pain stricken. I walk to the headboard, grab it, and kneel down, forcing you to taste my nectar. I moan. I move further down your bound body to your throbbing cock. Straddling you, I lower and raise my body, rhythmic tempo, until you cum. I rub my hand through my wet pussy and force you to taste your own juices. You try to pull away, but I force my fingers into your mouth. I've had enough of the dominatrix act... it's your turn!
Author notes
This is my 1st attempt at a bondage erotica... very tough keeping it under 20 lines. Hope the story-esque write is okay for you.
A contest entry
- HUGE POINTS Our Love Lifes ADULT 18+ by WillAlwaysLove.
1800 points, ended November 19, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please be brutally honest! I appreciate constructive criticism.
Comments
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Hot! Love women who take control! And loved the twist at the end.....=
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wow!
What very descriptive words! Talk about erotic city. LOL Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks pal!
That was quite a challenge. Never thought I could shrink so much detail into 20 lines... fortunately I could get away with writing like a story... something I never do... instead of stanzas. Anyways... glad you enjoyed it!
~*DJ*~
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Very kinky! It was different than what I am used to but I like it! Maybe I will try it! LOL. Your poem was great, super flow, great prose, thank you for sharing. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Very Kinky Fantasy
Great imagery aswell as highly evocative content.
Dances excitement upon the imagination*wink
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Yikes!!! This was HOT!!! Great job and good luck in the contest!!!
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