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Trapped

I can't escape
Your call is just too strong
I lie here pleading
For some consolation

I can't fight this any longer
Pain is taking over
I must relinquish hope
Allow me just one chance

I can't escape
Your call is just too strong
I lie here pleading
For some consolation

I need you
I need you

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  • Nicotine Eyes
    November 7, 2007
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    wow, great write. I think you could have expanded it maybe a little longer but its ok nice job.


  • I AM SpokenFor
    November 7, 2007
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    I love you. And I love this. Simplistic and genuine.

    *hugs*