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Songs of Seduction

I can hear the distant music
 whisphering softly in my ear

I can smell her earthy scent
As she is drawing near

Hypnotic is the spell she cast
That has enchained my mind

I can feel her encircle me
With lust's fire and wine

I walk with out knowing where
My steps will lead me to

Just a shadows hidden vision
In a misty sea of blue

So now I fade from the land
No more to be seen

Captured by the music played
By the sea's siren queen

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  • karma-n-peace
    November 7, 2007
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    Awesome write! Very sensual and romantic.
    Classy not pornographic LOL!
    Very nicely done!


  • Knight70
    November 7, 2007

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    These are my favorite lines in this piece. I found this to be an evocative piece, filled to the brim with seductive imagery. Very well done! I wish you the best of luck in this contest with this elegant piece of poetry. Knight70


    I can feel her encircle me
    With lust's fire and wine



    Just a shadows hidden vision
    In a misty sea of blue









  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Stunning!!

    Very sensual and soft... I love it...

    I didn't even see the picture, but went to look and you have written a poem that captures the image.

    But I love it without the image also... it creates its own in your imagination!


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Beautiful You Captured the Prompt well . I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Please do not reply to this message wait till the contest is over if ya remember Again Excellent Poem.. Cara