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Falling Stars

Starlight and moonshine
Lights her cloudy skyward path
She lands in my arms.

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The requirements of a haiku are that it must be three lines long with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 again in the third. This one was random inspiration. Hope you like!

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  • Foxydaze14
    August 11, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery. A perfect 55


  • kyuuketsuki ai
    November 24, 2007

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    Yay japanese poetry! but seriously, i really do like it. Because you added nature with other factors, it's still traditional, and very cool. HYDE is proud.^_^jk. but seriously.ahaha. hem. great haiku.
    'skides!
    M


  • Dlvvanzor
    November 16, 2007

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    Haiku! WOOT! Love those. And this has got some great images, sis. Nice one! *high five*
    Love ya sis!
    -Dlvvanzor


  • HarvesterOfHearts
    November 8, 2007

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    i love haiku! and this is amazing sis! i really like this its soo deep and beautifal.

    good luck in the contest!

    love ya, ~theharvester