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Sister's Vow

Hello, Brother, how are you?
Have a seat, relax a bit
so I can introduce myself.
Settle down, while this story I knit.

I heard a bird calling for help....
As I investigated, he looked toward me
and said he fell from his nest -
now he needed a family.

I'm answering the call, I'd like
to think, in the best way I know how.
I'll be there for you whenever you
choose to need or want me, this I humbly vow.

Though I may not be able to solve your
problems, or help your sorrows,
I can promise you I'll be by your side
today, & for the rest of our tomorrows.

Little Brother, I want you to see
this person, who I am, what makes
me different. I care, truly,
about people, no matter what path you take.

I trust quickly, & have often been hurt.
I am sensitive to others' thoughts,
especially to how people treat me
when for their acceptance I have fought.

I know life isn't always roses -
forget peaches & cream -
I still look for the sunshine,
the bright side of everything.

I believe in Jesus Christ
& long for the day I'm in Heaven,
where some of my family is already,
& I hope to see my friends.

I will try to be what you need
& give it my all - but please:
understand I may fail, stumble, & fall.
Just think on the good things:

How I'll help you up
& really care about you.
All you have to do is let me in
& we'll be a family, it's true!

Well, Brother, it's time for me to go.
I've deeply enjoyed our time together.
Think on the things I've said...
Smile, no matter what the weather!

Author notes

I may be a long-lost Sister, but I truly enjoyed writing this one!

Mike, my dear Bro, your poem, "just a flying visit" ( www.allpoetry.com/poem/3410004 ) helped me with mine, & thank you for the inspiration you gave!

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  • Tom The Invader
    December 4, 2007

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    Very Good

    You've gracefully described what siblings should be like without sounding like a lecturer. I like how it was put together. Good job!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 4, 2007

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    BREATH TAKING

    Your words are truly the real you...a wonderful and caring sister...They would be crazy not to want you...This is just the sweetest and thank you so much for sharing you with me


    • SunDew
      December 4, 2007
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      tender wolf

      Thank you, my sweet sister!


      ~SunfloweRose


  • UnManned4Ever
    November 17, 2007

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    Michelle!!! This poem is sooo touching and really well written. Sorry I missed you today. i had to work form 4am to 12pm, but you can call me anytime tomorrow. Love and miss ya girl!!! *flower*


    • SunDew
      November 18, 2007
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      ann

      Thank you so much, my dearest friend!! I love & miss you so much!


      ~SunfloweRose

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