Invisible, forgotten, a whisp of a person
Neither praised nor critiqued
Applauded or repremanded
Neither sub-par nor extrodinary
Lost in the mix
Another face in the crowd
No eye contact, no feeling
Looking in from the outside
Hazy glass, fogged mirrors
Revealing, concealing
No one beleives, no one sees
That I am one of you
Please tell me what you think
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awesome write
im glad i came after your contest to read this cause if i read it before hand i may not have entered cause you have great flow and i admit i would think that would make a harsh judge im glad you liked my work and yes i will enter my other one
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Wow
You could really tell in this poem, that you are lost amongst other people and not known to the rest of the world. I like it.
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Interesting.. i wonder if this has anything to do with a poem on here, that no one commented on? Just a guess!
If so, then I suppose, like you and I, and every other member on here who isn't one of those poets who has so many AP friends that everything they do is commented on, a lot of people are invisible in the same way..
Of course this poem could be a metaphor.
I like the ending best
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