Drawn into the love
Which flows from
The depths of your
Lovely green eyes
I'm sucked into
A whirlpool of love
That won't let me go
And I don't care
The love which
You hold for me
Is so strong
And overpowering
To my weak soul
I'm drowning and
Spinning so fast
Out of control
For you
And you alone
You and your
Deliciously
Green eyes
I'm now lost
Completely
In your eyes
Author notes
Jeneralix- sister
I would have applied for gf except I'm completely in love with someone else lol
TR- I love you darling!
A contest entry
- AP Family by Theory Of The Lost.
390 points, ended January 18, 2008, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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ooo this was very pretty... I love the green eyes part.. I totally have green eyes.. muahahaha! And the fact that your page is green is awesome!
So I used this title too.. but then I changed the name of mine... I don't like sharing titles.. ::grumbles:: but now I'm feeling like you did something better with it... but.. oh well!!! Good luck for the trophy aspect.. and gratz if you become his ap sister!!!
J~~~~
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