Saxophone blared concrete solo,
reverberating tiers, heaped from tar
Suited camouflage, hiding lonliness,
emptiness and unfulfilled,
lowering head in sorrows
Lifting hopes high above dreams,
ambitions tunnel... sped further away
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Inspired
A contest entry
- QUICKIE!!!! ~Picture Inspired~ PIF by PerfectImperfection.
525 points, ended November 7, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this is stunning. An amazing interpretation of the prompt, lovely language, and great depth.
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nice musical take.
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WOW!!!!!!!!! this is my favorite one in the contest so far I love the profound take,, you could take this a couple of different ways.. This is fantastic...
Delila
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Nicely done for this contest, good take on the prompt, best of luck to you. I can never place in these.
Scott
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Such a great take on the prompt chosen. Nice use of imagery as well. Thank you for your entry!
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