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Dreaming Hope

Inside looking out....
delving into soul's window

towards daydreams of wonder;
hope in majestic worlds,
divided by oceans and tears

Tears of sacred loneliness
enveloping spirits consumed
by everlasting love

Author notes

PROMPT: 30 words of wonder


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exit scene by spyroteknik


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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    November 8, 2007

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    you did a very good job with such few words. thank you for sharing this write with me and i wish you well in this contest that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie


  • I Dream
    November 7, 2007
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    tres sweet

    nice work


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 7, 2007
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    Nice work, dear sis!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Oh this is a lovely poem even though it is
    I love it sister. Well done. best of luck to you


    Delila


  • PerfectImperfection
    November 7, 2007
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    A very nice take on the prompt chosen. Nice imagery throughout. Thank you for your entry!

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