Lost visions of beauty,
gazed in shadow,
speak whispers of banishment.
Exile forms,
frames of reference,
highlighting locations,
Within known states of agony,
far from the city once shining;
abandoned.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE!!!! ~Picture Inspired~ PIF by PerfectImperfection.
525 points, ended November 7, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh wow. You did an excellent job on that prompt. I loved the line "within known states of agony,"
Congratulations on your silver.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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this is sooooooooooooooo Good...
Fantastic take here Good luck to you it is a winner to me.
Delila
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wow my dear bro awesome job i have been feeling the sadness you wrote of so mesmerizingly. many blessings always xxx
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Excellent take on the prompt chosen. Very well spoken lines... Thank you so much for your entry!
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