Visions of you on a motorcycle drive by.
So young you left us, so early, too soon.
Why did he feel, it was your time to leave.
The changes you made, to better yourself.
The motorcycle, tried in the past.
You beat it, with passion.
Your life you made last.
Longer, time for change, and changes you made.
A better quality of life.
Why now did it take you away?
The motorcycle won, it robbed your youth.
Many times I close my eyes, there you are riding by.
Riding in the wind, with a wonderful grin.
Hair blowing in the breeze, flying by without regret.
Visions of you on a motorcycle drive by.
Free as a bird, without a care in the world.
(C)Nichole A. Dustin
11/7/2007
Author notes
Prompt, Pick a line from the song, I chose this line.."visions of you on a motorcycle drive by...."
Comments
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amazing a beautiful job thankyou for your entry, i wish you the best of luck in it
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oooo I love this... you did an amazing job! I love your rhyme and how it still seemed to free flow... It was very light, easy for me to veiw in my mind!
Jessa
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very good poem love the line you picked. i feel your emotions and i agree he was taken too soon.
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