She's walking a fine line,
with romance on one side,
loneliness on the other.
The parents forbid it,
but they can't be just friends.
They must be together or separate.
A contest entry
- Word Prompt 10/30 by AliceinPoetryLand.
900 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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Yes this is an all too true situation you have penned. In the end we always feel we have made the wrong decision. Thanks so much for your entry. It's great!
Gaylene
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I know that feeling. I hurts too bad to just be friends so better to separate and hope time makes it easier.
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