Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

29 Professional Poets


29 professional poets
all around a quill

A song of thoughts,
poetic devices, on war
all barren land

A wounded heart
penned one funeral line

not 29 professional poets

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 7, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Yes it only takes one for the whole to become unbalanced. Thanks so much for this great entry.
    Gaylene


  • sheltered
    November 7, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    I love the originality, fluidity, the imagery but i'm not sure I fully "get it".