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a Fine Line


Almost invisible to the naked eye
it stretches far across the ocean
uniting families and friends
all across the city and state


Bringing hope and love
back into their hearts




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Prompt: A Fine Line

30 Words

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Sinfully Yours
    November 9, 2007
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    short, sweet, simple, and very descriptive! Wonderful job!
    Miss Marie


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 7, 2007
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    Beautifully penned with such love and hope. Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • sheltered
    November 7, 2007
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    It is a fine line
    and lets hope many more
    step to the right side of it.