thousands of clustered glass baubles:
shapes to hold the world,
or emotion of a single tear-
add another to the collection.
a crack forms
(a spider web of
impending collapse).
Author notes
A Fine Line.
A contest entry
- Word Prompt 10/30 by AliceinPoetryLand.
900 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WoW this is great,
not at all what I was expecting from the title.
I can see why you won a gold.
really awesome job.
Good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is a beautiful poem... I love the brevity and formatting of your words - they both add so much to the powerful effect of your words... I can see why this won gold! Wonderful poem
Keep writing
Polly
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excellent word choices that make this piece create strong imagery in just a few lines. i read the original prompt this was from, and you responded to it well. i enjoyed this read - keep up the good work <3
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Damn this is great! I love the feeling in this and the creative idea behind...... makes the poem so expressive. Awesome, just awesome. Gratz on the cup.
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Yes this is a stunning p[iece. Love it! Thanks so much for this entry.
Gaylene;f -
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Thanks for everything!
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Excellent
Damn i'm out of applause points again.
This is freaky-good.
Love the abstract coherency. -
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Freaky-good....That makes me chuckle. Thanks!
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excellent
Wonderful interpretation of the prompt - best of luck in the contest.
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