As you break open the soft, thick peel,
the warm wine red juice rushes to fill your hands.
You finally break open the succulent fruit
To view the world beyond,
A world of rubies and splendor,
Take as many as you want,
Just don't be to greedy...
Please tell me what you think
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U R a great writer and truley penned a great poem!!U inspire me to want to write more often.Please write more poetry soon.

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