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Pomm

As you break open the soft, thick peel,
the warm wine red juice rushes to fill your hands.
You finally break open the succulent fruit
To view the world beyond,
A world of rubies and splendor,
Take as many as you want,
Just don't be to greedy...

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  • HannahYellowBannana
    November 7, 2007

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    U R a great writer and truley penned a great poem!!U inspire me to want to write more often.Please write more poetry soon.