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- Left or Right -

 

 

 

 

Attitude anxious,  tone tinkers
     on path,  intuition polluted.

Left-Right pointers,  perfection
    somewhere in-between.

     Stakes high,  heart decides
          if worth priceless.

Love him or feed to lions;


Cat's cage opened...









Author notes

Prompt: A Fine Line
30Words...

In-between counted as one word...

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
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Comments

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  • Moodayo-Okohke silver member
    November 9, 2007

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    LMAO~...If you have to ask then feed the guy to the lions!
    Nice My Little Lotus Flower, thanks for sharing and the smile...


  • Amera gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    For 30 words, this is fantastic. I wouldn't want to be on your bad side.
    "Love him or feed to lions"

    hehe...

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    November 8, 2007

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    I say feed them all to the cats and build some new ones.....lol I liked this so much. This time we'll make them more caring so we won't have so many problems. Missed You. Hugs~ Cuddles


  • Puppydog gold member
    November 8, 2007

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    OH MY! CHOICES!!!!

    What is right or wrong, is he real or is he fake? Is she true or false, oh the questions!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Whoa!!! To throw em to the lions
    or not!! That is the question!!
    I'll say that is a fine line.
    Awesome write as usual my dear
    friend. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    Wow what a fascinating write hun, you do capture so much when you're asked to use few lines... goodluck in the contest

    Karen


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Wow this is very powerful and I felt like I was on a tightrope in this! Strong ending too.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • sheltered
    November 7, 2007
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    Very well desribed the prompt.
    I felt like I was on a balance beam
    while reading it.


  • thepoetssoul
    November 7, 2007

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    This is a powerful penning indeed.
    I love the imagery and wording
    Thanks for sharing you talent
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • StarEyes
    November 7, 2007

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    What a read this one is!! And sooooo amazing! You have created a powerful read with this one!!

    For some reason..

    "Love him or feed to lions;

    Cat's cage opened..."

    These two lines, just keep jumping out at me...

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nettie


  • penman gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Excellent

    Oh my sweetness. What a powerful creation for 30 words. Best of luck in the contest.

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