Pencil point,
heavy like lead,
sketching schizophrenia
on bristol bored insanity,
shading in the areas
where knowledge was withheld.
Blank white paper pages
colored far beyond
the lines of reason.
A contest entry
- Word Prompt 10/30 by AliceinPoetryLand.
900 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, totally different take... I loved the metaphor here and the stregnth with in them. Great inerpretation... bold emotion. Gratz on Bronze!!
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Wonderful metaphors in this! An excellent piece. Thanks so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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Excellent. Thank you much dear!
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Excellent
Great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh My!!
I knew that if You entered...
I would have to get my brain cell reserve
or me get a brain transplant
Magnificent piece You have penned my Friend!
Love Your take on the prompt
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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oohhhh this is rich!
I love this...great take on the prompt!
I really like this line (how funny am I?): sketching schizophrenia on bristol-bored insanity...
but the ending is best...beyond the lines of reason...
where I live...
great job cowboy!
Blessings! Tammy
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