fists forced through glass walls
their strokes scratching skin
she tried to wear long-sleeves
but he tore those off with
all of her other clothes
the unwanted pleasure
hypnotizing, staying
A contest entry
- Word Prompt 10/30 by AliceinPoetryLand.
900 points, ended November 7, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
Comments
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wow...
congrats on the silver trophy...
this is worthy indeed...you took the prompt and ran with it...
this is impressive poetry, sir...
great write!
Blessings! Tammy
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a dark one... and in so few words you have said quite a lot... quite alot indeed. congrats on the silver... the gold must have been awesome.
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thats really good. i like it a LOT.
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thanks lily
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See you haven't lost your touch - liked the brevity of these lines, the flow and the great interpretation of the prompt - nice silver to add to the collection. Way to go.
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Awww ... thanks
Glad you liked this, will have to catch - up with you soon
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Excellent! What a take on this prompt!Amazing! Thanks so much for entering.
Gaylene
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Glad you liked, thanks for the Silver
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Yikes
Such abusive language.
You're scaring me man.
But your back!
Great stuff.
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Haha, sorry, this was a dark one... glad you think so
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holy cow
awesome. totally. it was totally awesome. loved it! -
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glad you enjoyed
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