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Walking Into Futility

Echoing footsteps much greater than mine
coming down from the hallway before
diminish what faint steps MY feet may define
making nary a dent on the floor

Author notes

more structured than I tend to attempt, but I think it turned out about how I wanted

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  • Hurtheart
    February 26, 2008
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    wow i dont even think i can comment on this i have felt that exact way so many times


  • Piper77
    November 8, 2007

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    I really liked this A LOT! I think it's great, and I love the structure of it. Keep it up!

    *snap*