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Your Smile

Your smile is like the sunshine,
It glows in shiny rays,
And it's because of your beautiful smile,
That I don't mind rainy days.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 8, 2008

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    This is so shrot and sweet and it's so true. When you have someone special with you, the weather, time time, the atmosphere, it doesn't matter, just as long as you have them as they make the most disappointing things seem beautiful.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 6, 2008

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    This is so sweet and brings an automatic smile. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 23, 2008
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    This speaks volumes of heart. A beautifully done piece.


  • Legend silver member
    February 22, 2008

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    I need to know which other poem/s you entered so i can judge the contest correctly could you please enter it in your authors note thank you


  • Legend silver member
    February 20, 2008
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    Sometimes all that is needed to say what you want to say can be done in just a few words This is such an example.Good luck in the contest

    Please do not reply to this comment as i wish to keep the contest Anonymous If you have not entered your second poem please do so making sure to name this one in your authors notes Thank you

  • Legend silver member
    February 11, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry


  • Dutch Doll
    January 21, 2008

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    So short yet so very sweet and romantic, congrats on all the tropies, very well earned,

    blessings
    adri


  • country-girl
    December 9, 2007

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    beautiful piece of work, i thoroughly enjoyed it. very nice immpact, and beautiful arrangement of the words. very nice. thank you for entering!!!


  • Stardust100
    December 9, 2007
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    Oh such a sweet write a joy to read well done loved it


  • Blueskywonder
    November 29, 2007

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    I love it
    Such an explosive piece contained in so few words.
    Thankyou for taking the time to enter my contest... also Good Luck!

  • Liquid memories
    November 20, 2007
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    awwww sweet feelings indeed. success in the contest.


  • Roseycheeks15
    November 20, 2007
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    This is Nice! good job good luck in contest


  • Ryno
    November 7, 2007

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    Excellent similes in these to quicks writes........your awesome Lily... see you on the bus tomorrow lol

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