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The Coldness

The coldness seeps through my body
Right down to the core
Throught my bones, musscles and skin
Please I can bare no more
From the inside out
Shaking uncontrolably
Waiting for the heat

Thinking of warm climates
Just to bare the pain
Searing through me quicker now
Heading for my brain
I feel it rushing up my spine
Making me quake and shiver
And rattling of my teeth

Some one shut that window
Some one close the door
Help me turn the fire up
Please some one help me thaw
Walking neer the fire
Feeling the warmth on my lips
My body stios the shaking and the rattling of my teeth

The warms encapulates my body
Lifts me from the night
It wraps me up in its warming arms
And shows me the bright light
I thought I'd never feel this way
My body thaws, heart flutters
For now I bask in the light
Free now from the darkenss

Author notes

To my boyfrend..if u understand the reference

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