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Expression



An expression of night
appeared in the East
where Daylight has always dawned:
a creation of Darkness
(or is it the destruction
of what it means to be day?)

It's when what's never been
is suppressed by logic
beget by intolerance.
It's to emerge where
it has always disappeared.

East to West,
East to West,
always East to West.

What is the difference between
the sun setting
and night approaching?

Just a different shade of day.

West to East...


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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    This is really unique and well written. Enjoyed it!! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • TwilightDazzles
    November 7, 2007

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    Oh gosh, you guys are making this rrreally hard for me lol This was amazing, I love the metaphor used and the twist at the end. I liked it a lot!! Thanks for your entry and I wish you the best in the contest