Oh how I miss you my dear.
I long to hold you near.
Though wisdom could never ascertain,
Losing you has brought so much pain.
My heart aches when I see your face.
My mind cannot conceive that you are in a better place.
I will hold onto your smile.
Though it may be for a little while.
When my life has come to pass,
You will greet me in heaven.
With a sweet embrace at last.
Together we will remember the past.
A fathers love for all time.
And rest assured, my love,
I will walk the line.
A contest entry
- Open Wounds by Eugene Cash Hensley.
700 points, ended November 26, 2007, 19 entries
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Wow. Thank you so much. Wonderfully done.
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I feel the love of a mother penned in every line
There are no words just a smile for the love you hold within your heart. good luck in the contest.
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opps sorry but for some reason i felt mother ....i read your poem again
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dustookie2
Thank you but I am her father. I hoped you enjoyed it.
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This piece touched my heart
I can't begin to imagine the loss of a child; my deepest condolences to you
Thank you for sharing your heart
Know that, yes, you WILL see your angel again; healthy and whole
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This beautifully worded piece goes straight to the heart of the reader. I can not even imagine all the courage it took to write this.
Cathy -
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Heavenly Angel
I am pleased to be able to share this with all. Thank you! -
daviscth
Thank you! I hope you enjoyed it.
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