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Evolution

Purity is an old-fashioned word:
(today it's completely absurd)
believing you're absolutely sure
(but nobody's 100% pure)
of your racial blood line
(twisting life's tree like a vine)
stretching backwards in time
(your furthest back relatives: leaves)
ushered forth from Adam and Eve's
children of sin run amok
(when their parents were fresh out of luck);
I really just don't give a f*ck
that your evolution is stuck.

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  • Patpowers silver member
    November 10, 2007

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    Brilliantly done! CONGRATULATIONS on the trophy with this. You deserved it. THANKS for giving us your perspective!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    This is a very nice take thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love


  • TwilightDazzles
    November 7, 2007

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    This is true, there is no way we can possible document each and every race that is within our blood, we are all muts (mostly). Thanks for this entry and best wishes in the contest