I knew it was my time today
I really had to go
I'm sorry that I left you Momma
Please know I love you so
When your sad and missing me
Always keep in mind
Forever I am in your heart
Just for you to find
The day will come, you will see
You'll hold me once again
I'll meet you where the rainbow ends
I promise, my loving friend...
Author notes
This is for a friend of mine who lost her dog to cancer today.
What did you think
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Very poetic - written with a caring heart. I enjoyed the sentiment. Happy trails
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this reminded me of how someone's child died before them. although i know how losing a pet feels, i try to hold back my tears from not only this but my other pets too
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oh iam holding back the tears
i love animals
this poem held compassion
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Awww
How touching. Loosing an animal can be just as tough, well penned!
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That touched me deep, i love this one i really do
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I really liked the last two lines they actually spoke to me... alot of poems are loud but they dont speak at all this one did speak... good job
chrissy
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Like hit my heart---not my head--always a good thing
There--to me--is nothing more powerfull than love, of any kind. And this taps into it 4sure---husband, wife, lover, family, friends---it's what poetry is ment to be. and u nailed it. : )
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Thank you so much for such a wonderfulcomment. I am off to check out some of your work now.
Anna
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That rhythm and rhyme and flow is great in these lines - easy to read and understand what is happening here. Pets become part of our family and especially if they have been with us a long time, we certainly do miss them when they are gone.
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this is a beautiful piece, one that anyone who has known the hardship that accompanies the loss of a pet can relate to. I've always been around animals, be they pets, wildlife or part of my "ranch inventory". I too believe that those that we lose, be they human or animal will be reunited with again when our time here is finished. A very enjoyable piece. Well done!
Rory
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A most beautiful, poem
My heart cried
Very well written ,flows like a song
Bravo Anna
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What a beautiful tribute for your friend! It is sad when we lose what we care so much about! This was nicely penned and will mean so much to your friend!
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reassured
very nice write for your friend . . some comfort for her loss . . like "Forever I am in your heart" and "I'll meet you where the rainbow ends" . .
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We all come from a single source
and there we will return
For this but a stop in life
with lessons to be learned
We rise and fall like ocean
as a body of just one
As we move among the current
between the moon and sun
Our heart grows dim at passing
Sadness is in the loss
Emotions too are falling
as among it's waves are tossed
But with each storm encountered
the rainbows seen at end
And when this cycles finished
we'll meet round yonder bend
Hugs...Eddy
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