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morning

morning arrives in total darkness

cold and chill awaken my senses

alone and drowsy I begin

solitary thoughts always crowd in

a hot brew warms my soul's flame

feeling returns and I begin again

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  • Utok Bulinaw
    November 16, 2007
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    Short and simple. Thank you for this entry.


  • Dogsandcows
    November 12, 2007

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    Nice one...simple, to the point, and yet describes my morning every morning...Well done, honestly I couldn't have described it so eloquently!!!!Good write...


  • Rheea gold member
    November 8, 2007
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    short and packs a lot I like these