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Cocaine anyone?

The sweat drips from my eyelids
as the sound of loud silence fills my ears.
The beat of my heart is that of a song-
-fast and uneven

The tingle of numbness fills my face
and the taste of bitter sweetness engulfs my mouth

1969~
on my way from California
to a New York festival
where the rest of us will gather.
Where the drugs come easy,
but not cheap.
Money's not a problem with a body like mine....

I tremble as i realize what im partaking in
-moans that sound like mine excape my lips involuntarily.

*black out*

I awake-- its night.
Where is this place?
-So beautiful
All the Earth's Children surround me
in a whirl of complete bliss.
The Who's guitar riffs complete my soul.

I need my fix.
just as im thinking this
someone hands me a bag

wow this is going to be a good four days.


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"I'm as pure as the driven slush"

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  • Applesauce
    November 12, 2007
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    Wow.
    i had to get the courage to read this poem.
    because i saw the title a few days ago.
    and i thought to myself "how stupid"
    Cocaine - from personal experience - has got to be one of the stupidest mistake anyone could make, and not one you have to make on your own.


    • BeautifulChaos44
      November 12, 2007
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      what? "and not one you have to make on your own" o baby you have no idea about me and cocaine.... thanks for the comment i guess


  • Romanee
    November 8, 2007

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    This was FANTASTIC!, you really captured what I was looking for!!!! I liked how it didn't really rhyme because this piece really didn't need to, OH and the imagery was AMAZING!!! goodluck in the contest, keep it up, xx


  • Xxno morexX
    November 7, 2007
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    Just pure sweetness