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From the Bottom of My Heart-Acrostic

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For everything that you do for me
Reaching out to touch my inner soul
Opening your heart and life
Making me feel so loved and appreciated

Thank you for always understanding me
Hope and inspiration is what you bring into my life
Each day I wake to find you by my side

Breathing, loving, and accepting me for who I am
On eagle's wings we fly when we are together
Time always seems nonexistent as you take me
To the top of the universe and celebrate our love
Onto distant galaxies and uncharted territories we fly
Making the best of every minute that passes us by

Of all the people that I call friends
For years you have been the closest to my heart

Many days of trust, honesty, and communication has helped
You and I grow as best friends and lovers

Holding onto your heart has been such a blessing to me
Every smile, kiss, and warm embrace
Always gives me so much inspiration to move on
Residing here in your arms is a place so sacred to me
Thank you for loving me, from the bottom of my heart

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Blooming Poet
    March 3, 2008

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    so sweet. actually this poem is going to be used like my other contest, that closed. I wanna give good poems to my BF for our anniiversery and this is perfect, may I use it?????
    Thanks for entering.


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    your words speak love
    and you are a great poet
    your acrostic form is perfect
    and so is the way you made it just
    pour off the page


  • FindinSoundInSilence
    December 21, 2007
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    it's very nicely written. i like the way you worded everything. it lightens the soul.


  • crazziladi
    November 12, 2007
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    Beautifully written as usual good luck


  • Denierim
    November 11, 2007

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    Such sweet words to someone important to you. When it comes to love poetry, I usually don't warm up to writes like this but for some reason this one touched me a lot... I don't know why but I read it three times to find a smile on my face and that's one of the best ways to touch me through poetry. There's so vivid emotions of love in this piece it just speaks for itself, and I could see this as a love letter to someone you love easily.

    Beautifull done with this one! Keep on writing, you've got a great talent there!


  • felixangel
    November 8, 2007

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    it's well writtin and then it's sweet to have some care

    misty


  • Angelic Princess21
    November 7, 2007
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    written very well. i loved it. good luck in the contest.

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